User talk:Hotborad

First person commentary

When you edit a page, please write the descriptions in a neutral journalistic manner. Do not put first person commentary or directed commentary (towards the reader). Thus don't write "I saw Gun A used by Character B", you write "A Gun A was used by Character B". You don't write "You will notice that the gun is visible", you write "The gun is visible and noticeable". MoviePropMaster2008

CHUCK screenshots: Please upload the entire frame

When uploading screenshots, please upload the entire frame and not cropped shots. Overly cropped shots do not give the page the uniformed look preferable for these pages. Thanks. --Ben41 06:44, 25 November 2010 (UTC)

BEFORE making a page

Before making a page for a film like Outrage, please make sure you have some descriptions of the weapons used and some of the gun pictures ready. The page for that film was deleted once already because it was not properly formatted and NO guns were put on the page. Take a look at a page such as Safe House for how a properly formatted page should appear. If you do not make the proper changes soon, this page will be deleted and you will be put on notice. --Ben41 17:23, 20 March 2012 (CDT)

Much better with Outrage. Just please let users know in the future that you're still working on a page by putting a {{workinprogress}} banner at the top, so it won't get deleted. --Ben41 20:39, 20 March 2012 (CDT)

Yes much better the second time around. --Jcordell 00:48, 21 March 2012 (CDT)

Sleeping Dogs

Please do NOT copy the summary from other sources such as wikipedia. Please write your own. Also, we do not usually add screenshots from commercials for games because these usually does not reflect what will be in the actual game. I'm going to keep it up for now, but this page may be deleted. --Ben41 01:41, 24 March 2012 (CDT)